Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Descriptive writing about the wind

Today at school there was a very strong, cold wind. This gave us a perfect opportunity to write using describing words in our writing. We went outside and felt the wind in our faces and then looked at a tree that was blowing in the wind. Here are some of our great stories...

It was cold outside. The tree looked like a monkey swinging it’s tail. The leaves were shaking.
Skylah

The wind was like a dolphin flying and felt like I was in magic land. It felt like a storm around my head. The tree was like an octopus.
Seraphina

The wind felt like an ice cube. It was cold.
The trees were waving around.
Noah

The wind was like a hurricane. The wind in the tree looked like a terrible monster.
Aaron

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