Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Descriptive writing about the wind

Today at school there was a very strong, cold wind. This gave us a perfect opportunity to write using describing words in our writing. We went outside and felt the wind in our faces and then looked at a tree that was blowing in the wind. Here are some of our great stories...

It was cold outside. The tree looked like a monkey swinging it’s tail. The leaves were shaking.

The wind was like a dolphin flying and felt like I was in magic land. It felt like a storm around my head. The tree was like an octopus.

The wind felt like an ice cube. It was cold.
The trees were waving around.

The wind was like a hurricane. The wind in the tree looked like a terrible monster.

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